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David Robertson 5945937ffd
Another "position in the mainline" -> "mainline position"
Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>
2022-06-14 18:11:10 +01:00
David Robertson fe979ee50f
say "mainline position" rather than "position in the mainline of P"
Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>
2022-06-14 18:10:44 +01:00
David Robertson ac5c477937
Note that e_0 may not be in the second list; typo fix
Co-authored-by: Denis Kasak <dkasak@termina.org.uk>
2022-06-08 18:35:28 +01:00
David Robertson dbf66b93b9
Batch of suggestions, thanks Denis
Co-authored-by: Denis Kasak <dkasak@termina.org.uk>
2022-06-08 18:26:21 +01:00
David Robertson 4ecd8a8a24
Minor typographical tweaks
looks better in Firefox. I am sad to be writing a poor man's TeX though.
2022-06-06 14:13:14 +01:00
David Robertson c2d55eed84
Rework the mainline ordering more dramatically.
This has undergone a fairly large rework, so needs careful inspection.
2022-06-06 13:49:00 +01:00
David Robertson 91da0e186b
correct spelling of power_levels
Co-authored-by: Denis Kasak <dkasak@termina.org.uk>
2022-06-06 12:50:51 +01:00
David Robertson e2d8cfcfd7
Opinionated: improve def of the closest event to e
``iteratively descending through the `m.room.power_levels` events in the
`auth_events`-starting at *e*.`` was also unclear to me. Unfortunately
this is now more symbol-dense and I'm not sure if it's a net improvement.
2022-06-01 15:52:03 +01:00
David Robertson 45440197de
Better description of the mainline of a PL event. 2022-06-01 15:25:22 +01:00
David Robertson 3f7b0e80a3
Minor drive-by state res clarifications (#1042)
* Opinionated rewrite of unconflicted state map

* Define auth chain
2022-05-30 14:13:55 +01:00
David Robertson 81d61d87f4
Italicise primes and brackets in state res desc (#1043)
* Italicise primes and brackets in state res desc

I don't like it but it seems to make things look decent in Firefox.
This is probably good enough---we're not Knuth, after all.

Additionally I have avoided the use of `*E*'s` as in "E's prev_events"
since the apostrophe looks poor here.

Resolves #774.
An alternative to #1040.

* Changelog
2022-05-10 13:29:29 -06:00
David Robertson 5181de4080
Stateres v2: Use bold to introduce definitions.
Otherwise they are inline into the paragraph without punctuation, and
hard to read.

I'm guessing that pandoc did a poor job of converting a LaTeX
`begin{description}...\end{description}` or `\paragraph{...} ...` to
Markdown.
2022-04-29 15:41:26 +01:00
Travis Ralston a5a27f69af
Hide room version fragments from table of contents (#3479)
The entries were text-less and not really helping anyone. They are included as pages because we need them for templating, but we don't need people to be able to land on them directly.
2021-11-09 06:40:29 -07:00
Travis Ralston 241e01c332
Fully specify room versions (#3432)
* Fully specify room versions

* Misc typo clarifications

* Try to clarify redactions a bit

* Update content/client-server-api/_index.md

Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>

* Update content/rooms/v6.md

Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>

* Update content/rooms/v6.md

Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>

* Better describe client considerations

* Doc template params

* Move redaction "new stuff" to v3

* Remove unhelpful sentences about "here follows unchanged stuff"

* Simplify event signing text

* Clean up handling redactions sections

* Move v4's event schema to unchanged section

* Update content/rooms/v4.md

Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>

Co-authored-by: Richard van der Hoff <1389908+richvdh@users.noreply.github.com>
2021-11-01 08:49:15 -06:00